Full disclosure—I was second place out of three people.

Beatrix, a fourth-year Applied Folktale Logic grad student at the Budapest University of Supernatural Study, skimmed her notes for the Apple Theory reading group. It was her turn to present. Her classmate Tamás was alright, but if she missed a small detail, Lajos would pick up on it. She wouldn’t give him the satisfaction.

Their faculty advisor, Dr. Alma Pekurár, became one of the first apple theorists after an incident with her older sisters. That is, her older sisters (two—incidentally, one had one eye and the other had three eyes) gave her rags to wear and leftovers to eat. Alma was miserable until an old woman gave her an incantation to turn her pet goat into a loaded banquet table, which worked until her sisters found out and killed the goat. She planted the goat’s entrails (advice from the same old woman) from which sprung a tree with golden apples. Only she could pick these apples, for the tree was spectacular at evasive maneuvers. A handsome man witnessed her plucking a gold apple from a tree and realized that’s what he wanted in a wife, apple-picking abilities. So they married.

Her husband was curious about the tree, but laughed at her when she said it grew from goat entrails. Trees grow from seeds! Not goat guts! But Alma was determined to prove him wrong. She had her servants poster entire villages with notices that read “Are you the youngest of three siblings? Bullied by the elders? Best friend is a farm animal? You may be eligible for our study! Come to the B.U.S.S. at the start of winter and ask for Alma. Compensation provided.” Three months later, she proved the bullied group had a statistically significant advantage compared to the control at generating magic trees from pet parts. Her dissertation, ‘Golden apple, poisoned apple: Familial mistreatment and leveraging interspecies relationships,’ singlehandedly saved hundreds of middle and oldest siblings from divine retribution. Now, twenty years later, she was chair of B.U.S.S.’s Folktale Logic Department. Divorced.

“So!” Beatrix announced. “The paper I’m presenting today is an interdisciplinary study: ‘Existence of a merged apple-metallic triad’ by Nagy et al.”

She shuffled her notes. “To review, the field of triadic metallurgy studies magical objects that come in groups of copper, silver, gold or silver, gold, diamond, often referred to as a metallic triad. For example, cups and forests.” The other students nodded. This was kindergarten folktale logic. “While gold apples have been well studied, these authors note the existence of copper, silver, and diamond apples, always with the predicted group structure. They argue these apple-metallic triads can be connected to other sets of metallic-triadic objects. Nagy et al.’s results hinge on a case study in which three kidnapped princesses turned their castles into apples for ease of transport.” She held up a diagram. “The three castles were copper, silver, and gold, forming a metallic triad, and the merged apple-metallic triad arose from that.”

“Wait, I thought there could be anywhere from three to seven metallic elements,” interjected Tamás.

“That’s horse legs.”

“But only those four? What about smiling apples? Technically it should be possible to have a group of five.”

“Smiling apples have only been observed with talking grapes and ringing peaches. Not other apples.” Dr. Pekurár nodded at Beatrix’s response.

Lajos cleared his throat. Uh-oh. “We’re focusing on the wrong thing. This paper is trivial.”

“Oh?” Beatrix replied. “How so?”

“I mean, if you just think about basic apple theory, gold apples are the only ones with any special properties. You can’t offer someone a silver apple as a proposal, or place one atop a tree to screen suitors for a princess. Even Alma’s work concerns only gold apples.” Dr. Pekurár nodded again. “If copper, silver, or diamond apples are appearing, they have to arise from an existing metallic triadic set.”

Beatrix rolled her eyes. “There’s no possible way you could know that. Absence of evidence is not evidence of absence.” Fielded. How do you like them apples, Lajos?

“But this experiment isn’t replicable,” he protested.

“Go ahead and try. Good luck getting that one past the Ethics Committee.”

“You know, I read a paper on using elements of a metallic triadic set out of order. Silver, copper, gold. Something like that,” Tamás piped up again.

“How do you use an apple?” Lajos protested. “That’s beyond the scope of this work.”

“Uh, you eat it?” he replied, leaning back in his seat.

“I don’t think you can eat a gold apple.” For once, Beatrix agreed with Lajos’s speculation. “But anyway, the whole thing’s trivial.”

The creak of a wooden chair startled all three students. Dr. Pekurár had stood up.

“To confirm, Lajos,” she said, “your qualm is that for an apple-metallic triad to form, the apples must be transmuted from an existing metallic triad?”

“That’s right.”

“As you know,” she said, clearly planning something, “folktale magic can also be used to settle disputes.”

She turned Tamás into a copper apple. She turned Lajos into a silver apple. And she turned Beatrix into a gold apple.

Hmm, she thought. Works.

Author’s notes:

(1) In the off-chance anyone reading this doesn’t already know about the Monthly SimLit Short Story Challenge (it’s possible by this point, but still unlikely), the challenge description can be found here. Voting starts October 1st and ends October 7th. It’s a real small contest, so if you’re one of the ~15 people who forms my reader base, we’d all be very grateful if you chose to participate in the voting. No pressure though; it’s your life, don’t let me tell you what to do. Revolt! Revolt!

(2) In the off-chance anyone who participates in the Monthly SimLit Story Challenge doesn’t know that I write other stuff, I write other stuff. You’re invited to read my main story, Catastrophe Theory, which has been described by peers as “dense,” “intricate,” and “super dense.” But again, I’m having too much of a blast to worry about self-promotion; read it or don’t, everyone has more important things to worry about. Revolt!

(3) These scenarios are all based on real Hungarian folktales. HUNGARIAN FOLKTALES ARE AWESOME. Hungarian folktales are the topic of the best educational animated series to ever exist. No joke, everyone involved in this must have been constantly fried out of their minds on psilocybin. Here are some of the stories referenced:
One-Eyed, Two-Eyed, Three-Eyed
A Talking Vine, a Smiling Apple, and a Jingling, Tingling Peach
The Poor Man’s Vineyard
Brave Prince Nick (horse legs)
Tiny Tom and the Lily Princess (horse legs)

Here’s a short post on apples by Zalka Csenge Virág, a Hungarian storyteller and significantly more sober fountain of knowledge. She knows a lot of neat stuff, like that there’s a princess named Rosalia Lemonfarts.

(4) Oh yeah, don’t worry, she turned them back.

The Applied Apple Approach

20 thoughts on “The Applied Apple Approach

  • September 26, 2019 at 12:46 am

    There’s so much I love about this! All the realistic little details of the paper presentation are great. Arguing all these weird little details only people in the field would know-awesome! Choosing a wife based on her apple-picking abilities – fantastic! Smiling apples only with talking grapes and ringing peaches–hahaha. Very entertaining story. It left me smiling.

    • September 26, 2019 at 12:50 am

      Yay! I swear, all the details each happen in an actual Hungarian folktale. They’re bonkers.

  • September 26, 2019 at 1:10 am

    I bet she didn’t turn them back.

    Do you know Love for Three Oranges? That what I thought of in the end… only the Russian word for oranges is Applesina… lyublyu tri apel’sina.

    • September 26, 2019 at 1:30 pm

      LOL. I love that you’re familiar enough with my body of work that when I say everything’s going to be fine, your immediate response is “no it isn’t.”

      I hadn’t heard of Love for Three Oranges before! The Hungarian word for ‘apple’ is the same as the Spanish word for ‘soul.’

      • September 27, 2019 at 12:42 am

        Oh, that’s cool! Well, Love for Three Oranges is a really neat Russian fairy tale, and it’s my favorite opera. You’ll recognize the theme from the FBI radio show… or… maybe not! LOL! Anyway, it’s by Prokofiev. He also wrote my favorite ballet, Romeo and Juliet.

      • September 28, 2019 at 12:06 am

        Oh, cool! I love Prokofiev’s other work, and most other (well-known) Russian composers from that time period, so this is definitely something I should check out.

  • September 26, 2019 at 2:20 am

    This was as intriguing as it was entertaining! Loved all the details that made this story. The question now is whether Tomas, Lajos, and Beatrix will revert to their Sim form or just become rotten apples. Cool story 🙂

    • September 26, 2019 at 1:32 pm

      She turns them back! I promise! If she doesn’t, the universe will find a way to punish her. Hungarian folktales are great like that. You kill your sister and stuff her body in a violin, the violin plays songs about the murder until she comes back to life. You kill two princes and turn them into like eleventy million things to keep them from coming back, they come back anyway. You turn your students into apples? Better turn them back before something else happens. A folktale logician would know this.

  • September 26, 2019 at 8:42 am

    Very interesting and fun story! That’s one way to deal with conflict…

  • September 26, 2019 at 8:43 am

    Very interesting and fun story! Loved the ending – that’s one way to deal with conflict!

    • September 28, 2019 at 12:04 am

      Yay! I think Hungarian folktales are probably where our interests most intersect. They’re a class of their own for sure.

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  • October 1, 2019 at 3:42 am

    I’m glad she turned them back haha. Great story I like how you used the folktales as inspiration.

  • October 2, 2019 at 1:13 am

    This was very neat and totally brought me back into the classroom when I had present research for my science classes. Love it. Also, yes turning students into inadament, silent objects is certainly a way to end an argument. Glad that she will turn them back. Hopefully they will not argue so much.

  • October 2, 2019 at 4:50 pm

    “Applied Folktale Logic” I love that as a field of study. Your story made me feel like I was actually sitting in on their class. I was laughing way too loud from “Her dissertation” to “Divorced”! I had to stop for a minute. The story was so much fun and your world building made it feel real. I watch animated Hungarian folktales on YouTube and the tales are fantastic.

    • October 2, 2019 at 7:42 pm

      YES!!! THE ANIMATED SERIES! I’m sure you picked up on at least a handful of references to those!

  • October 7, 2019 at 11:15 am

    This was awesome! I mean, I just know I’m going to love a story containing the line, “the tree was spectacular at evasive maneuvers.” And it only got better from there. 🙂

  • May 11, 2020 at 7:05 am

    I’ll always enjoy these short story challenges of yours. It’s interesting to see your writing in another setting like it is here, and as always, it’s just fucking amazing is all I can say.


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